i need help with lyrics :')
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this shits about something personal so dont read into it too much (also its a w.i.p so sorry if its shitty and dramatic lmao)
killer butterflies
v.1:
“oh how the guilt surges through me when i see your face. the way my stomach twists and turns, i cant even think straight. the way your hugs make me shiver to my core, i just wish she wasnt the one your looking for…”pre chorus:
“i know shes better in every way and it kills me that you love her more each day, but why do i have this need to be by your side and hold you tight. its honestly a curse that i know i cant fight.”chorus:
i cant seem to control these killer butterflies, i just want to look into your eyes. this guilt and sorrow, i swear this is awful but at least ill see you tomorrow."yes judge and take as many notes as you can :) i need it-
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@scarlet-lol Oh, this is really good. It might help to format it like lyrics. Also like poetry : )
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@Duchess thats what i was going for
very poetic and emotional
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@scarlet-lol I meant like:
v.1:
oh how the guilt surges through me when i see your face
the way my stomach twists and turns
i cant even think straight
the way your hugs make me shiver to my core
i just wish she wasnt the one your looking for…pre chorus:
i know shes better in every way
and it kills me that you love her more each day
but why do i have this need to be by your side
and hold you tight
its honestly a curse that i know i cant fight.chorus:
i cant seem to control these killer butterflies
i just want to look into your eyes
this guilt and sorrow
i swear this is awful but at least ill see you tomorrow -
@Duchess yeah i get it
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@scarlet-lol Well, heh, yeah, you are doing a good job : )
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@Duchess thanksssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
