What do u think so far?

[KayaRoseWho]

I am making a story called love is pain.

Love Is Pain….
By KayaRoseWho?
Part 1…

“When will I wake up…” I thought to myself.
“Why am I still sleeping?” I said to myself In a dark room. I looked around, I saw the light. Why? Am okay?. Am…I…Dead?!. No, I can’t be dead, That stupid…Why can’t I remember anything?!..

“Honey….please wake up!..” A female said. I wonder who it was. I heard people talking, so I was not dead…right?. I started to move my toes…then my fingers…”She’s awake!, look, look! She is awake…!” I heard that woman’s voice again.

Someone opened my eyes, i counden’t. I tried to speak but nothing came out. I looked around the room, I saw a woman who was fancy, and then I saw A guy who was also fancy. Then I looked down and saw a lil girl, she was in pigtails and she was wearing a pink and white dress. I looked next to me and saw a tall guy Who was dressed as a doctor and then I saw an officer and a girl. She was dressed like a therapist or something.

“Hey…It’s me, your mom,dad, and sister…do…do you remember us?..” She had said. I shook my head no, I wanted to speak but…i couldn’t

[KayaRoseWho]

KayaRoseWho what do u guys think of it?..

[A Former User]

KayaRoseWho I can’t read :)

[A Former User]

KayaRoseWho Ohhhh, I like it

[KayaRoseWho]

@Creati132 thank you

[KayaRoseWho]

@I_Løve_Zøf :(

[A Former User]

KayaRoseWho :(

[A Former User]

KayaRoseWho Well now I’m curious what happens next lol. It’s good so far :)

[KayaRoseWho]

@Duchess thank you! ill shere the other parts soon!