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      between the lives that flash by ever so quickly
      as the train speeds faster and faster
      forgetting and forgetting
      a growing ticking sludge constricts and complicates
      lives, which were once free and sustained
      rubble; not quite but not quite
      was there ever a city?

      it hides behind them as they fall apart,
      shattered into thousands of smaller yet smaller pieces
      each one less useful than the last
      yet I feed it.

      they see it
      do they see it? they must
      or maybe they are stuck

      But no! alas one speaks up
      To stop it, we must
      challenging, of course
      but he saw the despair and felt it too.
      and stuck and stuck

      someone else said he was wrong, but they didnt have any ideas either

      Its not hard to see the whole city as a train
      more like a train ever splitting and intersecting itself
      people smashing and connected to each other in an unending web
      each train has only one passenger

      but they’re all conducted by just one guy
      but he’s drunk
      or maybe he’s not real
      or maybe he knows what he’s doing more than us
      or maybe I spoke to him
      but heard the wind instead

      its weird, sorry for rambling

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