The book is now published

[A Former User]

This story is three chapters long, Considered a short story.

I’m here for any constructive criticism

Here are the character designs if you want a picture of what they look like. We haven’t started on the actual characters themselves.
https://mpp.community/forum/topic/50071/the-decided-character-designs-sneak-peek?_=1710001171460

[A Former User]

@ゼフィラ-ヤラ reading later when i’m done with posterboard

[A Former User]

ain’t reading allat but hooray

[A Former User]

I love that little part at the end, it just fits very well!!

[A Former User]

@ゼフィラ-ヤラ
No, but seriously, this is very good.

[A Former User]

@The4thFemC Thank you!

[A Former User]

@Bandit Thanks!

[Return of the german Wubbrle]

@ゼフィラ-ヤラ Such a good Book Ms. Zephrya! I really love it, but where is the part he says “I dont know who you are, I don’t know what you want, but I will find you man!” tho?

Book has to be 9,9/10