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    Killer Instincts (A little snippet of my upcoming short novel for a school project)

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    • Your Local Shadow SimpY
      π–€πΈπ“‚π’Ύπ“π“Ž 𝑀𝑒𝓇𝓇𝒾𝓂𝒢𝒸𝓀𖀐 Dumpster Fire Children
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      Characters for this scene:
      * Detective Anya Rose Thorne
      *Detective Tyler Sloane

      I stood before my boyfriend in the middle of the precinct, my face pale.
      β€œAnya…We got the DNA results from the crime scene back…”
      β€œTyler, I- I can explain!”
      β€œThe Angel’s been under our noses this whole time…”
      β€œTyler, please, listen to me!”
      β€œI can’t believe my Angel has fallenβ€”so far that now, she’s Death’s, wearing his wings instead of mine.”
      β€œTyler…I…”
      β€œEnough, Anya.”
      β€œTyler, I did it for you…I did it for love!”
      β€œYou caused religious panic across the whole town!”
      β€œβ€¦I love you.”
      β€œI thought I loved you, too. But you lead me astray, and let me love a killer.”
      "The most dangerous thing to do is to love."

      "𝐼 π“ˆπ“…π‘’π“ƒπ“‰ π“ˆπ‘œ π“π‘œπ“ƒπ‘” 𝒾𝓃 𝓉𝒽𝑒 π’Ήπ’Άπ“‡π“€π“ƒπ‘’π“ˆπ“ˆ, 𝐼'𝒹 π’Άπ“π“‚π‘œπ“ˆπ“‰ π’»π‘œπ“‡π‘”π‘œπ“‰π“‰π‘’π“ƒ π’½π‘œπ“Œ π’·π‘’π’Άπ“Šπ“‰π’Ύπ’»π“Šπ“ 𝓉𝒽𝑒 π“‚π‘œπ‘œπ“ƒπ“π’Ύπ‘”π’½π“‰ π’Ύπ“ˆ."

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        @Your-Local-Ghostface-Simp said in

        β€œβ€¦I love you.”
        β€œI thought I loved you, too. But you lead me astray, and let me love a killer.”

        That hit hard 😭

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        • Your Local Shadow SimpY
          π–€πΈπ“‚π’Ύπ“π“Ž 𝑀𝑒𝓇𝓇𝒾𝓂𝒢𝒸𝓀𖀐 Dumpster Fire Children @A Former User
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          @Youre_Just_A_Pun_To_Put_It_Politely THATS THE POINT

          Because Tyler is her boyfriend, but also her detective partner! They’d been following a serial killer case for months, and he eventually found out his own girlfriend who’d been living in his own home was the killer.

          "𝐼 π“ˆπ“…π‘’π“ƒπ“‰ π“ˆπ‘œ π“π‘œπ“ƒπ‘” 𝒾𝓃 𝓉𝒽𝑒 π’Ήπ’Άπ“‡π“€π“ƒπ‘’π“ˆπ“ˆ, 𝐼'𝒹 π’Άπ“π“‚π‘œπ“ˆπ“‰ π’»π‘œπ“‡π‘”π‘œπ“‰π“‰π‘’π“ƒ π’½π‘œπ“Œ π’·π‘’π’Άπ“Šπ“‰π’Ύπ’»π“Šπ“ 𝓉𝒽𝑒 π“‚π‘œπ‘œπ“ƒπ“π’Ύπ‘”π’½π“‰ π’Ύπ“ˆ."

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            A Former User @Your Local Shadow Simp
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            @Your-Local-Ghostface-Simp Damnn 😭

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            • Your Local Shadow SimpY
              π–€πΈπ“‚π’Ύπ“π“Ž 𝑀𝑒𝓇𝓇𝒾𝓂𝒢𝒸𝓀𖀐 Dumpster Fire Children @A Former User
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              @Youre_Just_A_Pun_To_Put_It_Politely yeah, it’s brutal, dude. And I’m already 2 1/2 pages in, and only subtly dropped a hint that she might be the killer.
              (She has blackouts, so she doesn’t really remember what happens.)

              "𝐼 π“ˆπ“…π‘’π“ƒπ“‰ π“ˆπ‘œ π“π‘œπ“ƒπ‘” 𝒾𝓃 𝓉𝒽𝑒 π’Ήπ’Άπ“‡π“€π“ƒπ‘’π“ˆπ“ˆ, 𝐼'𝒹 π’Άπ“π“‚π‘œπ“ˆπ“‰ π’»π‘œπ“‡π‘”π‘œπ“‰π“‰π‘’π“ƒ π’½π‘œπ“Œ π’·π‘’π’Άπ“Šπ“‰π’Ύπ’»π“Šπ“ 𝓉𝒽𝑒 π“‚π‘œπ‘œπ“ƒπ“π’Ύπ‘”π’½π“‰ π’Ύπ“ˆ."

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