Zeera's VERY first poem
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day is day, and night is night
black is black and white is white
we each go about our own individual day, and sometimes wonder; “just what can we say?”…
We can choose to be kind, or choose to be cruel,
but in the end, most of us abide by a certain set of rules
we laugh and we cry, we live and we die
we sometimes fall, but other times we fly
we are each imperfect and we fail in our own specific way,
but when we constantly pick ourselves back up, we can win the day
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Zeera the Nightmare Jackal's 2nd account
VERY very nice. Impressive. The rhyming is very good, the shift, word choice. Its written like a true poet! -
@MrTree Thanks! I put into a lot of thought with this one! :)
