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    Sometimes I Wonder (A poem)

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      A Former User
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      Sometimes I wonder if you remember,
      those stormy nights in sweet old September.
      I lost all I loved
      all that I held dear,
      Duty - no short of behoved;
      with you I had found no fear.

      Sometimes I wonder how your day has been
      but all I can think of is right back when;
      Aromatic June breeze
      pierced my fragile brain.
      As my thoughts freeze,
      I had went insane.

      Sometimes I wonder if you scream my name
      as I do yours, broken but still the same.
      I cry and I scream
      I wish not to bleed,
      though it was a dream
      It’s hope I do need.

      Sometimes I wonder if we can slumber
      My brain, my thoughts have long since encumbered.
      With each day that goes,
      I’ll reap what I sow.
      And fill our little world with wonder.

      Happy 2024.

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      • Wubbrle the [REDACTED]W
        Wubbrle the [REDACTED] The average Touhou Lovers <3 ..The Octobers.. 🍰 TAWOG Club Halloween squad Cult of Arsonists
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        ok

        https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X_5pQsDqnok
        bro this slaps ngl 🔥
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        • Wubbrle the [REDACTED]W
          Wubbrle the [REDACTED] The average Touhou Lovers <3 ..The Octobers.. 🍰 TAWOG Club Halloween squad Cult of Arsonists
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          did you do this by yourself?

          https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X_5pQsDqnok
          bro this slaps ngl 🔥
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            A Former User @A Former User
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            @RaeTaylor I love how you keep your rhyme pattern of AABCBC all throughout the entire poem! Many people change their pattern mid-way and it loses their rhythm. And the constant syllable pattern as well, I think it’s 10, 5, 6. I really love this poem and it was written really really well.

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              A Former User @Wubbrle the [REDACTED]
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              @Wubbrle-the-Wubble Yep!

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                A Former User @A Former User
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                @Soggy_Bread Thank you, it’s rather easy.

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                • Wubbrle the [REDACTED]W
                  Wubbrle the [REDACTED] The average Touhou Lovers <3 ..The Octobers.. 🍰 TAWOG Club Halloween squad Cult of Arsonists @A Former User
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                  @RaeTaylor I AM IMPRESSED

                  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X_5pQsDqnok
                  bro this slaps ngl 🔥
                  fsdfdfsdsdssdfdfsdsdsfdsf.PNG

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                  • Wubbrle the [REDACTED]W
                    Wubbrle the [REDACTED] The average Touhou Lovers <3 ..The Octobers.. 🍰 TAWOG Club Halloween squad Cult of Arsonists
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                    did i mention that you PFP looks… stunning? :)

                    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X_5pQsDqnok
                    bro this slaps ngl 🔥
                    fsdfdfsdsdssdfdfsdsdsfdsf.PNG

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                      A Former User @Wubbrle the [REDACTED]
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                      @Wubbrle-the-Wubble This lovely face is reserved for MADAME CLAIRE

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                      • Wubbrle the [REDACTED]W
                        Wubbrle the [REDACTED] The average Touhou Lovers <3 ..The Octobers.. 🍰 TAWOG Club Halloween squad Cult of Arsonists @A Former User
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                        @RaeTaylor Im sure that you will be her favorite student one day :)

                        https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X_5pQsDqnok
                        bro this slaps ngl 🔥
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