My attempt at singing Sakura, Sakura WITH instrumentals

[Zeera the Nightmare Jackal's 2nd account]

Again, any critique is welcome as this was a first. Here are the lyrics.

1st Verse:
sakura sakura
noyama mo sato mo
mi-watasu kagiri
kasumi ka kumo ka
asahi ni niou
sakura sakura
hana zakari

2nd Verse:
sakura sakura
yayoi no sora wa
mi-watasu kagiri
kasumi ka kumo ka
nioi zo izuru
izaya izaya
mini yukan

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