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    Killer Instincts (A little snippet of my upcoming short novel for a school project)

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    • Your Local FreakY
      ⛧𝔇𝔒𝔰𝔑𝔒π”ͺπ”¬π”«π”žβ›§ 𓁺 The Board 𓁺
      last edited by Your Local Freak

      Characters for this scene:
      * Detective Anya Rose Thorne
      *Detective Tyler Sloane

      I stood before my boyfriend in the middle of the precinct, my face pale.
      β€œAnya…We got the DNA results from the crime scene back…”
      β€œTyler, I- I can explain!”
      β€œThe Angel’s been under our noses this whole time…”
      β€œTyler, please, listen to me!”
      β€œI can’t believe my Angel has fallenβ€”so far that now, she’s Death’s, wearing his wings instead of mine.”
      β€œTyler…I…”
      β€œEnough, Anya.”
      β€œTyler, I did it for you…I did it for love!”
      β€œYou caused religious panic across the whole town!”
      β€œβ€¦I love you.”
      β€œI thought I loved you, too. But you lead me astray, and let me love a killer.”
      "The most dangerous thing to do is to love."

      "π”šπ”₯π”žπ”± 𝔦𝔰 𝔱π”₯𝔦𝔰 π”©π”’π”žπ”¨π”¦π”«π”€ π”žπ”£π”£π”’π” π”±π”¦π”«π”€ π”ͺ𝔢 𝔒𝔢𝔒? 𝔇𝔬𝔒𝔰 𝔱π”₯𝔒 𝔬𝔦𝔩 𝔱π”₯π”žπ”± 𝔦𝔰 𝔑𝔯𝔦𝔭𝔭𝔦𝔫𝔀 π”ͺπ”’π”žπ”« 𝔱π”₯𝔦𝔰 𝔦𝔰 π”ž 𝔠𝔯𝔢?"

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        @Your-Local-Ghostface-Simp said in

        β€œβ€¦I love you.”
        β€œI thought I loved you, too. But you lead me astray, and let me love a killer.”

        That hit hard 😭

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        • Your Local FreakY
          ⛧𝔇𝔒𝔰𝔑𝔒π”ͺπ”¬π”«π”žβ›§ 𓁺 The Board 𓁺 @A Former User
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          @Youre_Just_A_Pun_To_Put_It_Politely THATS THE POINT

          Because Tyler is her boyfriend, but also her detective partner! They’d been following a serial killer case for months, and he eventually found out his own girlfriend who’d been living in his own home was the killer.

          "π”šπ”₯π”žπ”± 𝔦𝔰 𝔱π”₯𝔦𝔰 π”©π”’π”žπ”¨π”¦π”«π”€ π”žπ”£π”£π”’π” π”±π”¦π”«π”€ π”ͺ𝔢 𝔒𝔢𝔒? 𝔇𝔬𝔒𝔰 𝔱π”₯𝔒 𝔬𝔦𝔩 𝔱π”₯π”žπ”± 𝔦𝔰 𝔑𝔯𝔦𝔭𝔭𝔦𝔫𝔀 π”ͺπ”’π”žπ”« 𝔱π”₯𝔦𝔰 𝔦𝔰 π”ž 𝔠𝔯𝔢?"

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            A Former User @Your Local Freak
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            @Your-Local-Ghostface-Simp Damnn 😭

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            • Your Local FreakY
              ⛧𝔇𝔒𝔰𝔑𝔒π”ͺπ”¬π”«π”žβ›§ 𓁺 The Board 𓁺 @A Former User
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              @Youre_Just_A_Pun_To_Put_It_Politely yeah, it’s brutal, dude. And I’m already 2 1/2 pages in, and only subtly dropped a hint that she might be the killer.
              (She has blackouts, so she doesn’t really remember what happens.)

              "π”šπ”₯π”žπ”± 𝔦𝔰 𝔱π”₯𝔦𝔰 π”©π”’π”žπ”¨π”¦π”«π”€ π”žπ”£π”£π”’π” π”±π”¦π”«π”€ π”ͺ𝔢 𝔒𝔢𝔒? 𝔇𝔬𝔒𝔰 𝔱π”₯𝔒 𝔬𝔦𝔩 𝔱π”₯π”žπ”± 𝔦𝔰 𝔑𝔯𝔦𝔭𝔭𝔦𝔫𝔀 π”ͺπ”’π”žπ”« 𝔱π”₯𝔦𝔰 𝔦𝔰 π”ž 𝔠𝔯𝔢?"

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