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    • ?
      A Former User
      last edited by A Former User

      :)

      https://www.noteflight.com/scores/view/ef6b4df681e712d911ed85fa342637f3d28df609

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      • LorakL
        Karol RealPianists DEV Music Enthusiasts listenin to spotify
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        One brief suggestion: Add an additional measure, then expand the last note to be two full whole notes. Then strike the last chord again.

        The part that stands out the most is how the piece is phrased in 3/4 time, but the sheet shows 4/4.

        Sounds great, but it does sound too familiar as if I have heard it before.

        Hope my suggestions and thoughts help. :)

        "karolmoneygold the wrecker, he is here" -➕(no name)➕ Discord: karolcpm

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        • ?
          A Former User @Lorak
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          @Karol Bro The language of music is Impossible for me -

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          • LorakL
            Karol RealPianists DEV Music Enthusiasts listenin to spotify @A Former User
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            @Kumi It just takes practice. Do you play any instruments?

            "karolmoneygold the wrecker, he is here" -➕(no name)➕ Discord: karolcpm

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            • ?
              A Former User @Lorak
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              @Karol I have a piano at home I used to play viola so I know how-ta read the notes

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              • LorakL
                Karol RealPianists DEV Music Enthusiasts listenin to spotify @A Former User
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                @Kumi Viola, cool!

                "karolmoneygold the wrecker, he is here" -➕(no name)➕ Discord: karolcpm

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