Help me with this song I'm making

[Sphinx]

SO I’m making a song with Noteflight and bandlab
It sounds pretty alright too :)

Here’s my set up
New_Project (3).mp3

Noteflight

Bandlab

If you have any suggestions, Hand em’ over. I’m looking for a song title name… Lyrics… Maybe some extra pizzazz to the song like some more beats or some more instruments?

[Meguna]

Sphinx Sounds like a love song kind of maybe add some violins maybe for like bigger cords in the background

[Meguna]

Sphinx And I have some lyric ideas like it just came to me off the top of my head I can dm them too you if you’d like

[Sphinx]

Meguna Alright alright I’ll see what I can do :p

[Sphinx]

Meguna Oh sure!! Wow off the top of your head too- I wish I had that talent

[Your Local Ghostface Simp]

Meguna bro I was just boutta say something like that-

[Sphinx]

New song.mp3
Do the strings sound good here?
Meguna 𖤐𝐿𝒶𝒹𝓎 𝑀𝓊𝓏𝒶𝓃 𝒦𝒾𝒷𝓊𝓉𝓈𝓊𝒿𝒾𖤐

[Your Local Ghostface Simp]

Sphinx ooh, I like that, but I’d make them a little more present- :D

[Sphinx]

𖤐𝐿𝒶𝒹𝓎 𝑀𝓊𝓏𝒶𝓃 𝒦𝒾𝒷𝓊𝓉𝓈𝓊𝒿𝒾𖤐 Okay!

[Sphinx]

𖤐𝐿𝒶𝒹𝓎 𝑀𝓊𝓏𝒶𝓃 𝒦𝒾𝒷𝓊𝓉𝓈𝓊𝒿𝒾𖤐 Is this better? I made the strings a bit louder
New_Project.mp3

[Your Local Ghostface Simp]

Sphinx ooh, I like that!

[Sphinx]

𖤐𝐿𝒶𝒹𝓎 𝑀𝓊𝓏𝒶𝓃 𝒦𝒾𝒷𝓊𝓉𝓈𝓊𝒿𝒾𖤐 NICE! Can you hear a difference? Idk why but for me when I downloaded it, it just sounded like the old one and the violins didn’t increase which was weird

[Your Local Ghostface Simp]

Sphinx I could hear a slight difference. If you wanted to increase it more, you definitely could, but I def could hear a subtle difference. :]

[Sphinx]

𖤐𝐿𝒶𝒹𝓎 𝑀𝓊𝓏𝒶𝓃 𝒦𝒾𝒷𝓊𝓉𝓈𝓊𝒿𝒾𖤐 Nah cause it’s weird, On the actual song, It’s like… louder, But then on the download it’s quieter

[Sphinx]

𖤐𝐿𝒶𝒹𝓎 𝑀𝓊𝓏𝒶𝓃 𝒦𝒾𝒷𝓊𝓉𝓈𝓊𝒿𝒾𖤐 Nah cause it’s weird, On the actual song, It’s like… louder, But then on the download it’s quieter

[Meguna]

Sphinx YES YES